Major Goof

"RightFootDown" (rightfootdown) 01/28/2016 at 19:02 • Filed to: None

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Coming Tomorrow.

Little Black Coupe Turned Silver > RightFootDown 01/28/2016 at 19:28

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I mean this in the best way possible, but this needs a good proofreading by an editor. There’s a lot of good info here, but it needs a good polish to bring it up in quality.

Xyl0c41n3 > RightFootDown 01/28/2016 at 20:16

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Just wanted to echo Little Black Coupe’s comment below. This post would benefit hugely from paragraph breaks, proper punctuation, proper formatting and fewer clichés.

Also, it’s “its” not “it’s.”

I’d recommend looking up the punctuation and style rules from the AP Stylebook if you’re attempting to model your writing after that which is used by many American media outlets.

JDIGGS > RightFootDown 01/28/2016 at 20:44

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where do I download?